Monday, March 23, 2009

Angered By Silly Words Comments

Rating: 4.5

Uncontrollable anger twisted up inside
Looking for some outer relief
Boiling over without apparent reason
Stoked by stupid half suggestions
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Gordon D Wilkinson
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Adeline Foster 03 September 2009

Gordon: Pricking the conscience Tinged with remorseful thoughts Unspoken the apologies held back Wow: sure did hit the mark. Well expressed. Adeline

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Surayya Abbas 24 May 2009

Uncontrollable anger twisted up inside Looking for some outer relief Nice write.

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John Lyday 06 April 2009

Sometimes anger can be a fine vehicle in poetry.

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Christine Kerr 23 March 2009

Amazing how words and thoughts can sometimes feel like knives piercing your soul. The practice of self control can take you a long way.

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Fiona Davidson 23 March 2009

Amazing what a little anger can cause if you hold it in...great write Gordon...thank you...10+++

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James Mclain 23 March 2009

This cookie has way to many chips for me to digest yet I eat and eat and eat... :) ..iip

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Gordon D Wilkinson

Gordon D Wilkinson

Oxford - England
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