Anger So Sweetly (Revised) Comments

that was good! I really enjoyed it.

Your poem flows beautifully. It sounds like a great plan. : -))

What a splendid idea, a much better way of spending ones time indeed. Clever indeed. A big (10) from me---Melvina--

You adequately expressed exasperation but in the end proposed a harmonious collaboration.

Linda, I agree with.P d. about the last line, that so neatly tied up this beautiful poem. Marvellous. Lovely written as usual.10/10 from me. Loved it. Thanks for sharing it. David

and make anger sweetly in bed....loved the end! amazing stuff!

Linda, it's such a joy to read a good poem written with maturity by someone with maturity. 'Online' is being swamped by young girls who can' t or won't get their hands out of their panties, and write accordingly. Yish!

Turmoil and turbulence on the seas of emotion. I like it a bit steadier than this, but the solution is perfect for smoothing troubled waters. More very tightly focussed and poetic writing Linda. x

Ha ha what a good way to reconcile?

Laughing... but important truths memorably penned. t x

Linda, A lighthearted expression of the reality of relationships. I love the last stanza. Beautifully expressed. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Some special friend i'll bet! Linda...this is a fun, witty and entertaining piece...Clever & astute to the puncove the revision twice as much as the original. ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''frank/FJR

Nice twist in this poem. A great reconcilliation. Part of a fine romance.