Wednesday, April 4, 2007

(anger) My Faithful Friend Comments

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Anger, my faithful friend, never relenting, embedded in the
pit of my soul, ready to strike when fate and foe deal
their dreaded blows. Embracing you I have, all of my
life, drawing courage and strength in the face of pain.
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Pam Thomas
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Ana Monnar 13 August 2007

Great write again. You get your point across each literary piece.

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... Sheila 19 May 2007

Yes, guilt can be so controlling and many will use it against you. But, you got it right and stood up for yourself in this piece. God will convict you if you do something to be guilty over. It's not anyone else's job. Great writing!

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Melvina Germain 18 May 2007

I don't think I can say it any better than David, just keep on realizing that you don't have accept anyone's guilt. Let them own their own guilt and you my dear poet, you keep on writing. I enjoyed this piece very much and I look forward to reading more of your poetry. Cheers to you Pam--Melvina--

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David Harris 04 April 2007

Pam, you are getting better and better with each poem that comes from your gifted pen. The line that really struck home with me was, one day I realized it was not my guilt but theirs that I took that pushed you away. You said it so beautifully. Very true, not your guilt but theirs. You have top Marks from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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