Anger swells like a tide of fury through my veins,
my head swims in the sea of rage.
Fighting to stay afloat and in control,
as the pain rips through me.
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Claire! What a painful and poignant piece of your soul you have offered. Brilliantly well written. I literally feel your aching heart bleed through every word. What does not kill us makes us stronger. Trite but true. You're a talented writer.
wow....such a powerful piece! .....so terribly sad.....raises to mind my own anger and pain...i know what its like to be ruined by someone you love......i truly love this poem.....letting pain out is the only way you can heal...and move forward....keep writing!