Monday, August 18, 2008

Anger Comments

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I feel this anger building up,
its dwelling inside of me.
i tell it to go away,
but it says its hiding inside of me.
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Kaycee Anne
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Rebekah Gamble 18 August 2008

Hopefully your writing will provide you with an outlet.: -) This is well written in the sense that it is very expressive, but perhaps you could even out the stanzas. That would give it a better feel.

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