Saturday, July 26, 2008

Anger Comments

Rating: 5.0

Don't make a scene, Refrain
Angry words march through the brain
Mouth clamped shut as not to utter
Quivering body, quaking shutter
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Linda Moore
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Linda Weischedel 01 June 2009

Outstanding poem Linda!

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Meggie Gultiano 09 May 2009

you are a positive person with a heart of gold.Thank you, Linda for this nice sharing

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Salaam Freeland 23 December 2008

A nicely written description of restraint, and a positive message about it's benefits. I am a bit puzzled by this line however: 'quacking shutter'. 'Rapid fire has them spent, now words reload', is a great metaphor. Better the mouth do the shooting.

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Kesav Easwaran 20 November 2008

well said, Linda...anger has ever been human's fore most enemy in life...good motivational write in well framed lines...10

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Andrew Blakemore 05 October 2008

Great poem Linda, beautifully constructed piece. Best wishes, Andrew

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Tom Balch 24 August 2008

WOW, the anger comes through in this piece,10+ The control is the same as in my poem Sound Advice. regards Tom

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Sarwar Chowdhury 09 August 2008

.....finely expressed....10

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Ron Flowers 30 July 2008

Very well done. Uncontrolled anger is a very destructive thing. Ron

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Rema Prasanna 27 July 2008

It is good to control and refrain.. but..at times anger burst out.. a good thought.. Rema.

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Ted Sheridan 26 July 2008

I've always told my daughter that if you can control your temper you stand a better chance of the good days outnumbering the bad ones. Thanks.

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