Saturday, July 19, 2008

Anger Comments

Rating: 2.7

deep, dark ocean
womb vortex of secrets
there lies a black pearl
reflecting ominously
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wardha jawdat
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Reshma Ramesh 20 October 2008

oops........................................

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Sadiqullah Khan 24 September 2008

oh, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , nothing else

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, aryaindia 23 July 2008

I hail the personification of anger as it is and willed to be. You write with great conviction and exemplary style. Thanks. arya. And of course, I am unable to send you any message.

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Ivor Hogg 22 July 2008

an intriguing piece of writing. We have an english proverb 'Let sleeping dogs lie' i suppose it applies equally to oysters

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Leela Devi 19 July 2008

an interesting poem.thanks

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