Saturday, July 30, 2005

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Flickering embers of reason
Sparkling in the moonlight
Dancing before me like eyes
The gaze of my senses marks
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Missy Lynn
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Jerry Hughes 09 August 2005

Like this one Missy, it's got balls. Rhyming, particularly when it's 'moon in June' type rhyming, it can get extremely tedious. Cheers, Jerry

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