Friday, November 14, 2014

Anger Comments

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the bold eagle
flying far above your head
in times of peace
masquerading as a dove
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Kenneth Maswabi
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Dr Antony Theodore 03 November 2020

with its fierce speed baring its claws in an aggressive move emotionally charged to disturb peace with a cloud of dust Symbolizing anger.. a very fine poem. tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 19 November 2018

to provoke its descent with its fierce speed baring its claws in an aggressive move......spilling the blood of the innocent..........the flight of the eagle as a symbol of anger. very fine poem. dear poet. thank u

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Very nice poem on anger, Very nice poem on reading, Very nice poem on singing.thank you sir.

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Roseann Shawiak 15 January 2016

Wow! Excellent imagery with great meaning lying below the surface. Perfect picture of peace becoming disturbed and innocent people being killed. Really great portrayal of it's reality. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Kenneth Maswabi 19 January 2016

I am humbled by your comments. Thank you very much Roseann.

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Savita Tyagi 21 December 2015

Excellent poem. Loved the metaphor. Thank you for sharing.

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Nirmesh And Raman 14 November 2014

really good poem. good thought

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Nirmesh And Raman 14 November 2014

Good poem. Anger should be really controlled

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Gajanan Mishra 14 November 2014

with a cloud of dust, good writing, thanks..

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Kenneth Maswabi

Kenneth Maswabi

Maun, Botswana
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