You are my great foe!
Thousand times I tried to drive you out,
But you didn't go!
Your volcanic power burnt
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Poet Halder, I really loved this poem about anger. Those of us who can control our anger are more powerful than a Commander who can control an army. A welled penned write. Thanks.
True.Anger is our great foe.All of us wish to leave anger. A very good write indeed.In this context I request you to read my poem TEMPER, If time permits. Thanks and best wishes. Chandra Thiagarajan
The one emotion that we do our best to deny and repel but which always seems to be living their in the shadows waiting to explode like a beast. Your fight with anger is one of the souls great battle Great work!
Confronting the problem head-on. a sure way to break free. Good for you. A great write. Good job.
I love this poem, so easily written...ironical the fact is that you are showing anger to 'anger'...asking him to go away...loved it..
wow.. u conveyed such a great emotion so effortlessly.. hats off to u! ! !
I love your use of words & the flow of your poems - another great write!
Great expressions about anger. An emotion we all try to drive away and fail miserably.
Thats great! Perfect thing I found in this one is that..you have made clear demarcation between yourself, your belief and your anger.. We are not 'we' when we get angry!
A great poem - expresses well the concept of anger and its consequences.
An expression made with emotions, Words speak and An ear will. Hear.... GreAt reflection of anger The_African_Son
''You are my great foe! Thousand times I tried to drive you out, But you didn't go'' excellent starting and wonderful saying..yes! anger is the enemy........please read some of my poems.....
yes I agree with Patricia, when we control our anger we become more powerful. good read