Wednesday, August 26, 2009

Anger Comments

Rating: 5.0

The anger that i feel seems to steal my only joy,
boy! i can't imagine another emotion that erupts into motion,
as quickly as eyes see a floppin' bee.
Anger is a traitor false like a frequent masturbator,
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Adens Kamwi
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 20 August 2010

Anger is just short of one ‘D’ …just add and see result…wise poem with behavioral/social value…especially in today’s restless world…… thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Jenna Thomas 13 September 2009

Each thought is so valid. Thank you for sharing.

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Beauty Philosophy 12 September 2009

Good poem, well -crafted and conveys a strong message.

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Marieta Maglas 30 August 2009

nice double simile: 'boy! i can't imagine another emotion that erupts into motion, as quickly as eyes see a floppin' bee. Anger is a traitor false like a frequent masturbator, '' nice rational poem, thank you for sharing................10

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Bryan Alexander 27 August 2009

very well written I like how you added just a little bit of politcs to it thank you for your comments you left me forgive my lack of skill

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 26 August 2009

Anger is in place when mind is flooded with dark images of irregularities and dissastifaction.Very impressive writes Adens.

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Adens Kamwi

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