The anger that i feel seems to steal my only joy,
boy! i can't imagine another emotion that erupts into motion,
as quickly as eyes see a floppin' bee.
Anger is a traitor false like a frequent masturbator,
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Good poem, well -crafted and conveys a strong message.
nice double simile: 'boy! i can't imagine another emotion that erupts into motion, as quickly as eyes see a floppin' bee. Anger is a traitor false like a frequent masturbator, '' nice rational poem, thank you for sharing................10
very well written I like how you added just a little bit of politcs to it thank you for your comments you left me forgive my lack of skill
Anger is in place when mind is flooded with dark images of irregularities and dissastifaction.Very impressive writes Adens.
Anger is just short of one ‘D’ …just add and see result…wise poem with behavioral/social value…especially in today’s restless world…… thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10