Well; certainly full of anger
BUT, I think it's a bit too long;
'lots of single liners; each one almost a poem on it's own
N.B 'sorrow may fade, but one remains'
surely 'sorrow fades though love remains'
why not make this poem into a set of prose...?
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Well; certainly full of anger BUT, I think it's a bit too long; 'lots of single liners; each one almost a poem on it's own N.B 'sorrow may fade, but one remains' surely 'sorrow fades though love remains' why not make this poem into a set of prose...?