Friday, May 1, 2009

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It’s in y our blood
It comes prepared with us
Like a flood
Waiting to attack us
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Ragy Sandid
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David Child 01 May 2009

Well; certainly full of anger BUT, I think it's a bit too long; 'lots of single liners; each one almost a poem on it's own N.B 'sorrow may fade, but one remains' surely 'sorrow fades though love remains' why not make this poem into a set of prose...?

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