Wednesday, April 29, 2009

Anger Comments

Rating: 5.0

Anger threatens to steal me away
My soul burns with fire, my sanity strays
My heart beats faster, one single beat
My face reddens sudden from the intense heat
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Leslie Rodriguez
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sky dreams 15 June 2009

this is an incredible poem.. you portrayed this emotion perfectly 10+

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Anger threatens to steal me away My soul burns with fire, my sanity strays...... it will burn from within and force to do thing which can't be retrived mater... beautifully said in verse......10

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Shashendra Amalshan 23 May 2009

yeah I know the feeling...it feels like that..thanks...you v expressed it very well indeed 10++

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Surya . 13 May 2009

anger - it will come like a mountain and vanish like mist.nice.posted 10. surya

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James Mclain 29 April 2009

Take it easy, it will pass onto the next one...i could feel the heat..thank you...iip

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Leslie Rodriguez

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