Anger Comments

feeling of all but u pen it down. good work.

Ok, aside from the semantics and spelling problems, you can take your anger....very powerful emotion....and channelise it into something constructive. There are many people like you with similar sentiments, resulting from the aftermath of numerous murderous tragedies/attacks. For starters, you've already written this poem, haven't you? Thanks for sharing. Cheers. Subroto

a heartfelt poem..well done

Nice Peom. Need of the hour.

My house, is it burning under fire? I am gathering proof! To accuse my neighbour i scuffle, i ruffle and i shuffle the things! Still I can’t get hold of my anger! If someone could tell me What i should do with my anger? Those who saved the lives, The real heores, Would they come back To tell the tale…? To tell what we should do To gather the proof or retaliate! What should I do with my anger? My house, my nation, is burning under fire! I have reset your poems after language correctio and puncuation, to give perfection. Only in question form the auxiliary verb will come befor the subject. When it becomes a clause, the auxiliary verb will come after the subject like in a sentance form. for eg: What should I do? I dont know what I should do. Poem is alright.

a powerful poem, Tara....truly well-expressed.

its good that ur pen moves for reasons also, and u care for society