Monday, March 9, 2009

Angels Vs. Demons Comments

Rating: 5.0

there is a battle raging within me
that i can't control.
of angels VS demons for my earthly soul.
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louis rams
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a beautiful poem shows that the angels in you are more..as your angels ended this poem beautifully...

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~ Jon London ~ 07 July 2009

The balance within us all.....the good and the bad...the devil on every shoulder....Louis you write with depth my friend....Deep insight piece...that many of us can relate...well crafted my friend ......keep expressing that poetic soul of your...your words speak volumes

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Lee-anne Siegel 31 May 2009

Thank you for your poem. I am knew to the site and was recommended through a friend to view your poems. They are heartfelt and beautiful and I have had to struggle with the same sort of battles that try and steer us away from the truth. It is refreshing to see that others do as well. Take care and keep writing. Thank you Lee-Anne

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Catrina Heart 20 March 2009

Awesome pictorial of demons when and how they will attack a person's life and having a guardian angel to lead us to the right path...great end lines...10+++

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Vaibhav Pandey 10 March 2009

i agree with les..this is certainly among your best...very good indeed..10

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Sandra Fowler 10 March 2009

I am thankful for guardian angels. A fine creative effort, Louis. Ten for inspiring poems. Warm regards, Sandra

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aye sir. Great.. one of your best poems yet! ! !

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Christine Kerr 09 March 2009

This looks like a master piece in the making, So easy to understand and to see how goodness and kindness will always win out Good Read 10++

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Very nice message.The internal strife of good vs evil-humankind's toughest lesson...and love and forgiveness conquors all.A ten from me.

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a lovely write..how true..the demon takes charge when you are depressed

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