there is a battle raging within me
that i can't control.
of angels VS demons for my earthly soul.
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The balance within us all.....the good and the bad...the devil on every shoulder....Louis you write with depth my friend....Deep insight piece...that many of us can relate...well crafted my friend ......keep expressing that poetic soul of your...your words speak volumes
Thank you for your poem. I am knew to the site and was recommended through a friend to view your poems. They are heartfelt and beautiful and I have had to struggle with the same sort of battles that try and steer us away from the truth. It is refreshing to see that others do as well. Take care and keep writing. Thank you Lee-Anne
Awesome pictorial of demons when and how they will attack a person's life and having a guardian angel to lead us to the right path...great end lines...10+++
i agree with les..this is certainly among your best...very good indeed..10
I am thankful for guardian angels. A fine creative effort, Louis. Ten for inspiring poems. Warm regards, Sandra
aye sir. Great.. one of your best poems yet! ! !
This looks like a master piece in the making, So easy to understand and to see how goodness and kindness will always win out Good Read 10++
Very nice message.The internal strife of good vs evil-humankind's toughest lesson...and love and forgiveness conquors all.A ten from me.
a lovely write..how true..the demon takes charge when you are depressed
a beautiful poem shows that the angels in you are more..as your angels ended this poem beautifully...