Although I cannot see you, I feel your presence here
The comforting feeling that surrounds me, assures me you are near
You’ve come to take my hand, and release me from this pain
My body is giving up, no longer able to take the strain
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Oh my goodness, what an amazing poem! WOW! ! I must read more of your work, keep writing for us! Marilyn
I have chills...... wonderfully sensitive writing. Beautiful, just beautiful. How good you are!
that made me cry but it made me feel better so it was a good cry
Poison, this is a very nice poem, i enjoy reading it. thanks for sharing Mary :)
ok dear friend........you have done it again! ! ! this is one beautiful poem buddy! ! gave me goose bumps and chills! ! ! awesome awesome write! ! ! thnx soooo much for sharing! ! ! ! friggin AWESOME poem man! ! ! ! thats what im talkin about! ! ! thats love at its best man......and when you can honestly feel what you wrote about another person......you know that love will stand the test of time! ! ! again buddy....thnx a million! ! ! ! ! Brian
I love this poem I hope you can listen to tears in heaven by Eric Clapton I have written a poem called Tears on earth I got the Idea after I listened to Tears in Heaven
Goodness gracious, can you ever write a touching poem....This is so sad yet so beautiful and written with so much love...Your words in this poem have an 'Angels Touch! '~~~~~~~~~marci. :)