Tuesday, October 10, 2006

Angels Sitting Comments

Rating: 3.4

In the time of being lonely
I often think of you.

The wings and the invisible power
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Luis Gil de la Puente
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Afzal Shauq 04 October 2009

The world has been disenchanted. Contagious mediocrity, prudent scare, fearful steps, sweet and heartfeeling imaginations..well done..really wel written and impressive much 10/10

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a nice image indeed! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Ashraful Musaddeq 30 May 2009

Gorgeous moving comosition.10+

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Will Barber 15 May 2009

A poem to wing its way to a desolate heart, perhaps. Eloquent elegy, and very poignant. Alas - wings and a sigh of regret. Fine and passionate write as alway, Luis. - Will

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Anjali Sinha 11 January 2009

Eloquent and beautiful -10 anjali

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Chris Newlash 10 October 2008

You should read my poem called angel statues you might like it! I like this poem it's unique =)

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Kesav Easwaran 05 October 2008

Good meaningful write...the last two stanzas pointing sharp....to where? To the universal mind indeed...well done, Luis 10

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Arwen Lee CW 23 September 2008

Cherish the angels, caress their wings.... don't let them fall into darkness, where burns their wings and makes their horns grow....

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Sarwar Chowdhury 08 September 2008

...really a beautiful poem! I am touched...............+10

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Meggie Gultiano 11 April 2008

Beautifully penned, Luis..I love it

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Sandra Fowler 06 April 2007

Eloquent, beautiful and immeasurably sad. Strength for the journey, Luis. Warm regards, Sandra

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Pia Andersson 26 December 2006

Oh my friend what a beautiful poem...what is preventing us from beeing what we were meant to be - i dont know really You remind us that we can bloom and fly -fly home...Wishing you a Happy New Year filled with joy..Pia

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Luis Gil de la Puente

Luis Gil de la Puente

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