Tuesday, November 20, 2018

Angels Singing Comments

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She wanted to hear the angels sing.
So she dreamed that her arms became wings.
Then she flew up to heaven to hear their golden voices.
Hearing them sing made her eyes moist.
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Lamar Cole
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Sylvia Frances Chan 20 November 2018

What a beautiful poem created in a simple way, methinks. But you have done that in the shortest way to have this loveliest result. How brilliant are the end rhymes here, amazingly rendered, Lamar. Thank you so much for this brilliant poem. I have enjoyed a very lot. G.B.U. Amen. A 10 Vote and much much more.

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Rini shibu 20 November 2018

Such a lovely poem..dreams when come true adds glow to the face

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