Friday, June 22, 2018

Angels Outta Sight Comments

Rating: 5.0

And there were
God's angels
Lost in heaven
And damned Satan's
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Richard Wlodarski
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Carl Roussell 26 June 2018

The last two lines; Satan screaming tonight Having lost one more fight' really reach out and pull you in to reread the Poem. A 10.

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Richard Wlodarski 29 June 2018

Carl, thank you so much for your positive constructive criticism.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 June 2018

Devil's activities give us pain and sorrow. But while we remain memory of God life is motivated towards higher purpose. An amazing sharing is done here...10

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Richard Wlodarski 29 June 2018

Kumarmani, as long as we stay faithful to that higher purpose, we shall be surrounded by His Light. Thank you for believing it to be amazing.

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