Friday, June 7, 2013

Angels Of The Living Comments

Rating: 4.7

I'm lying at the bottom
of the ocean devoid of breath
just waiting for death
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Dave Alan Walker
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Patricia Grantham 22 July 2013

I can truly say Amen to this great write Dave. An Angel of light appeared and rescued a soul from the pits of Hell. All kinds of spirits was waiting to take hold. This leads me to invite you to read my poem An Angel Just for Me. I am thankful that you shared this poem.

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Heather Wilkins 02 July 2013

life is meant to be happy and carefree. good write

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Vipins Puthooran 21 June 2013

rise and rise/// good poem! ! ! Top markss**********************************

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Vipins Puthooran 21 June 2013

rise and rise/// good poem! ! ! Top markss**********************************

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Ramesh Rai 18 June 2013

your life is to be lived now you rise and you rise to the sound of the living beautiful write.xlent. thnx for sharing. regards

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R.j. Wynn 16 June 2013

R U back? Awesome, check out Stardust.

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Smoky Hoss 16 June 2013

Out of the darkness, and into the light of life; wonderful words Dave. Write-on!

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Payal Parande 12 June 2013

Life is a song - sing it. Life is a game - play it. Life is a challenge - meet it. Life is a dream - realize it. Life is a sacrifice - offer it. Life is love - enjoy it. Sai Baba incredible write i am in awe...you are angel of writing sir

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Geetha Jayakumar 12 June 2013

Wow..Superb! Beautiful poem well expressed.

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David Wood 11 June 2013

Despair can be so overwhelming at times but as Val said, life is for living.

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Valerie Dohren 09 June 2013

Life is for living and not to be spent in the depths of despair. Very imaginative and clever write Dave.

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R.j. Wynn 08 June 2013

Beautiful poem, power out of there!

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R.j. Wynn 08 June 2013

What about those concrete shoes?

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Gajanan Mishra 07 June 2013

my eyes are closing to nothing but darkness, good write, thanks.10 I invite you to read my poems and comment and vote.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 07 June 2013

Yes, you are right..never take life for granted..beautiful imagination..

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R.j. Wynn 07 June 2013

That's wild, Crazy good stuff.

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