I'm lying at the bottom
of the ocean devoid of breath
just waiting for death
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rise and rise/// good poem! ! ! Top markss**********************************
rise and rise/// good poem! ! ! Top markss**********************************
your life is to be lived now you rise and you rise to the sound of the living beautiful write.xlent. thnx for sharing. regards
Out of the darkness, and into the light of life; wonderful words Dave. Write-on!
Life is a song - sing it. Life is a game - play it. Life is a challenge - meet it. Life is a dream - realize it. Life is a sacrifice - offer it. Life is love - enjoy it. Sai Baba incredible write i am in awe...you are angel of writing sir
Despair can be so overwhelming at times but as Val said, life is for living.
Life is for living and not to be spent in the depths of despair. Very imaginative and clever write Dave.
my eyes are closing to nothing but darkness, good write, thanks.10 I invite you to read my poems and comment and vote.
Yes, you are right..never take life for granted..beautiful imagination..
I can truly say Amen to this great write Dave. An Angel of light appeared and rescued a soul from the pits of Hell. All kinds of spirits was waiting to take hold. This leads me to invite you to read my poem An Angel Just for Me. I am thankful that you shared this poem.