Monday, July 7, 2008

Angels Of Mine Comments

Rating: 4.7

This poem is lovingly dedicated to my priceless treasures; Jazzper and Jiselle Luene.

After two years of absence
I can no longer wait
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Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness
COMMENTS
Eyan Desir 05 November 2009

Good write my friend

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Aiswarya. T.anish 31 December 2008

Beautiful poem. I love it. Keep writing.

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Anjali Sinha 11 July 2008

Priceless. Mothers love indeed

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Dawn Slanker 10 July 2008

What a lovely and tender dedication. You can feel the love in this poem.

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S... Che 10 July 2008

a beautiful sweet love poem :)

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Frank Cannon 10 July 2008

A jewel of a poem sparkling in the light of its sharing.

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Konye obaji Ori 09 July 2008

Joan, you have a Paulo Coelho kind of simplicity when you write, that carries deep denotations and connotations. This is a beautiful poem as well.

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Colin J... 08 July 2008

Perfect... A beautiful poem... Colin J...

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Rema Prasanna 08 July 2008

This is a lovely poem, well described your feelings.. wonderful angels yours Rema

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Dr.subhendu Kar 07 July 2008

Oh, what a tunes of love filial when reveled in the core of heart tears gleans to oblivion living sways by the bliss.........wonderful poem.by the metaphors unequalled, well penned,10+.thanks for sharing

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Ivor Hogg 07 July 2008

I can feel the longing in your words Sincerity oozes from every word. But presented in free form prose. Not my favourite style ivor

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Rajaram Ramachandran 07 July 2008

A long time separation incrases the bondage.

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Ravi Sathasivam 07 July 2008

Sounds great. A nice poem. Thanks for sharing with me Ravi

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Wintersweet Guo 07 July 2008

Sounds sweet! Treasure your angels!

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Ency Bearis 07 July 2008

a nice poem i think for your kids...if i am not mistaken

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