This poem is lovingly dedicated to my priceless treasures; Jazzper and Jiselle Luene.
After two years of absence
I can no longer wait
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What a lovely and tender dedication. You can feel the love in this poem.
Joan, you have a Paulo Coelho kind of simplicity when you write, that carries deep denotations and connotations. This is a beautiful poem as well.
This is a lovely poem, well described your feelings.. wonderful angels yours Rema
Oh, what a tunes of love filial when reveled in the core of heart tears gleans to oblivion living sways by the bliss.........wonderful poem.by the metaphors unequalled, well penned,10+.thanks for sharing
I can feel the longing in your words Sincerity oozes from every word. But presented in free form prose. Not my favourite style ivor
Good write my friend