Angels Living In Colorless Harmony Comments

You establish a mellifluous rhythm from the onset, one that is pleasing to the Readers eye...Watch your word usage...''learned'', as opposed to ''learnt'' & Stanza 3/Line 3...didn't you mean to say ''no one''? Overall, commendable craftsmanship. F j R 2010

Rich in feeling, clear diction and ofcourse a very good subject. Somewhat similar to thoughts I tried to express in THE SLOW DEATH OF A BARD and PLASTIC FACES.

Really nice piece...enjoyed it!

that is a beautiful piece.

Happy and positive summimg up in the final stanza. A classic piece of art, great poetry. CP

I wana be some one like constantine..fighting evil...or even some one like van helsing fighting deomon...do u knoiw da best super power they have..love10++++

inspiring write..........well done

Cool lovely love poem, love it with 10.

Happily you will live, these words just follow, and i love the way the words flow and experss ur emotions, lovely poem

Beautiful and so well said.....

Good flow of words good write poet

No matter what we receive in suffering Don't let the phase halt you from loving Let compassion fill your hearts hollow Happily you will live, these words just follow..... .yet inspiring by its own introspection .thats the real path to trudge trough life when aloft in midst of sorrow loving is only panacea tomorrow.......wonderful emotion interwoven by emotion and strength of reality...yet ingenious flow by true spirit of passion, well penned,10++, thanks for sharing

dis is a nice poem! ! i realy like the 3 and 4th line... colorless rainbow is such meaning full words i think... xxx

nice piece, written eloquently..........rated ten.............well done

Beautiful write...angel...10: -)