I am high above the clouds,
This airplane a force of science,
But maybe angels are also above the clouds,
Always quiet with their presence,
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Paula, even if some would consider the subject matter silly, subject matter can become poetic if handled poetically. Chopping up spiritual ideas into stanzas doesn't make a good poem. You should read some really religious poetry: John Donne and Gerard Manley Hopkins for a start. Also, stop writing for a bit and immerse yourself in good contemporary poetry. That should help you improve.
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jeffersoncarterverse.com
I'd like to know what you think of it. Yrs, JC
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Paula, even if some would consider the subject matter silly, subject matter can become poetic if handled poetically. Chopping up spiritual ideas into stanzas doesn't make a good poem. You should read some really religious poetry: John Donne and Gerard Manley Hopkins for a start. Also, stop writing for a bit and immerse yourself in good contemporary poetry. That should help you improve. If you'd like, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com I'd like to know what you think of it. Yrs, JC