Tuesday, May 23, 2017

Angels Fly Above The Clouds Comments

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I am high above the clouds,
This airplane a force of science,
But maybe angels are also above the clouds,
Always quiet with their presence,
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Paula Glynn
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Jefferson Carter 23 May 2017

Paula, even if some would consider the subject matter silly, subject matter can become poetic if handled poetically. Chopping up spiritual ideas into stanzas doesn't make a good poem. You should read some really religious poetry: John Donne and Gerard Manley Hopkins for a start. Also, stop writing for a bit and immerse yourself in good contemporary poetry. That should help you improve. If you'd like, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com I'd like to know what you think of it. Yrs, JC

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