Angels Feared Comments
Fought hard, still missed the mark
Yet synchronicity has aligned
Our purpose, looking at the
Distant unseen things
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Sorry Doris, I do not like your formatting. Hard to read. The last line is a cliche. Cliches are not for poems where we expect poetic amplitude.
Sorry about the glitch which usually happens when I use my tablet. About the cliche, I really want to use angesl feared to highlight the fact that this person will go where no one else will. Well, can you think of another metaphor. Never scold a poet, Robert, it's his right to say as he please.
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7/28/2025 1:47:27 AM # 1.0.0
Dear Doris, such an inspiring poem.....10+++++
Thank you, Bro. Bernard, it's a way of life, missing the mark and yet, struggling on. :)