Sunday, July 17, 2011

Angels Dance Comments

Rating: 5.0

Alone in the dark for hours I lie,
awaiting answers from the sky,
Angels dance while others die,
Some had their fun, and some had to cry
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 17 July 2011

Nice poem composed with vivid imagery. I liked the theme very much. Kudos to your skill. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... I shall be highly obliged if you please read and rate my poem 'A world of treason' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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