Angels And Demons Comments

Comparisions are lively.Expressions are excellent. It seems you are very much practical.

your poem is the shadow of your hidden gratitute and puting every bit of hearty apperance

I can see a dedicated journey into self and ten digging out some really magnificent golden mirrors..mirroring all of us the truth of being human Sikta thats yet another loveliest 10++++++++++++

now I know what I am. Thanks for enlightening me, read my poems called angels, to get a different viewpoint. U may like it

well made. I wish i had more to say but, no one can say more then Lee B. Mack. ^_^ lol

Nice piece on morals.... told in an amusing way....

wow! it's a very wonderful one u showed a great part of ur talent in it i liked the last stanza it is a summary of the whole poem & a conclusion too. u amazed me by it.

Effortless expressions.....sweetly said in a frivolous tone of your bubbling teenage! ! !

''we are no angel no demon just humans seeking for some sort of finance to make our life lucrative, no matter even if our sins are figurative...' Angels and demons mediate between the sacred and the human being and between people.Well written poem..........10++

That novel certainly was a remarkable thriller and your poem is honest, delibrate and compelling. All of us awaken to such realisations every now and then. Wonderfully written.

Your poem ANGELS: is for the world and likewise for me, living as a WORD, or as WORDS through you, like your child, or like your sister or brother or mother or friend, and all of us are no more standing in judgment than your poem and no more than you... on its own YOUR POEM is life, perhaps in search of its angel or discerning spirits as it searches it's demon. But i comment only on your poem, not on you the writer as you and your poem are two diferent word merchants; and I am no more than a reader of that WORD... IN ALL OF ITS FORMS... and my comments are no more than a relationship with the WORD as you gave it life as a poem for me to read... your poem ANGELS, is the beauty and flaws of expression of the relationship it had and had for me, as I read it and read it and read it, as the beauty grows old and OR the flaws renew... (I thank you for that) . So also, write and read and trust your poems to live true to relationships for your poems, for you, for us; we see, for the WORD of it was and is made flesh witrhout judgment; you see? LEE B. MACK USA, FLORIDA

you are a little funny girl like any one else. these things happens to every one. nicely brought out.really beautiful. voted10 surya

interesting take on good and bad, we all do bad things but just should make sure we do more good things

emulated hitler is a bit strong but a good poem

angels and demons may exsits? but you my poet friend are living proof that poets speak with truth. gra

you are really wonderful in comparisons.. but these all are your personal experience..isnt it.. lines r composed fantastically..no doubt but a bit -vely tended..dont know why i feel? might be not correct.. but a good one..

dear.............................. it is the human way to do both good and bad.... but. but a tap ont he bad...... emulate the good. you would be blessed for it.

Hey this is a wonderful composition by you.. I like the argumentative manner in which you expressed the theme.. Hey! ! ! ! Angels and Deomons one of my fav books! ! You wrote this one well indeed.... My favorite part is this! ! 'When I gifted a goodie to my bro, he was one of the most elated persons in Milky-Way! ! ! But when I slapped him out of anger, ofcourse I emulated Hitler in some way'... these expressions are witty and entertaining too... What you say is true.. in some point in our life we may act like Hitlers or Ceasers.. this is good.. yeah after all we are human.. Yet angels and demons do lie within us.... when demons take charge it can only lead to destruction. Make sure you let the good forces over power evil... and best way to defeat evil is to look at the world with love... nice composition.. and like the message too. Very true there are no clear cut angels or demons in the world.. We all human love shan

haha yeah true...u picked the instances from common teenage life rather beautifully.........kinda reminds me how i controlled myself and my pen....from forging daddy's signature.... hey u might not believe but thats the only so called wrong thing that i haven't done.......... very good poem.....we need to stop wasting time in figuring out if we are angels or demons......... liked it................. ;)