Tuesday, July 28, 2009

Angels Comments

Rating: 4.4

Where do the angels stay?
In the large house, across the bay
My morsels come from them
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Nikunj Sharma
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Sally Plumb Plumb 11 April 2020

Very interesting. Food for thought... a different angle.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 28 September 2018

This piece reminds me of the Samaratins.

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Jake Shelvey 30 December 2009

Love this poem, well done, portraying angels in a modern form!

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Angel's lyre 11 August 2009

very good! I liked it

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Siddharth Singh 11 August 2009

Hahaha! Only some are richer... Very nicely done.

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Indira Babbellapati 10 August 2009

hey...makes my heart feel lighter!

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Christina Phan 10 August 2009

Great imagination and thoughts Kept it up lol 10++

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Brishti Mazumdar 03 August 2009

Ha Ha....wow....excellent..I liked your free thinking...really liked it...10+

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Subroto Chatterjee 03 August 2009

Ah yes, rich angels we too have now. Discriminating heaven....on earth! ! Not to worry. And don't be too anxious to become an angel yet, Nikunj! All in good time....keep writing... Cheers. Subroto

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Hanna Sara 03 August 2009

that's a cool poem... i hope i can be the angel.. but if i be the angel... i would like to stay in the forest.. when there's no body will disturbing me...

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Marilyn Lott 31 July 2009

An interesting tale about Angels in your own unique style. '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Miriam Maia Padua 31 July 2009

beautiful thoughts.. heart-warming... I feel angels everywhere 10+++ lovelots, Maia

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Rakesh Bedi 31 July 2009

A rich thought/richly expressed/to enrich the readers! ! !

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Meggie Gultiano 29 July 2009

well, this is nicely written. thanks for sharing

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Sandra Fowler 28 July 2009

Your words paint a poignant picture. At least in the mind of this reader. Warm regards, Sandra

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Anju Addanki 28 July 2009

arey wah superb hai too mast! !

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Bele Lele 28 July 2009

Hmmmm I like this one.

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Deborah Cromer 28 July 2009

A tasty, delightful little morsel. This one makes you think and wonder. DC

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