Angels Poem by Nikunj Sharma

Angels

Rating: 4.4


Where do the angels stay?
In the large house, across the bay
My morsels come from them

What do the angels say?
Nothing, they keep talking on phone,
To someone at the other end
Ogling someone else.

What do the angels do?
Attend page 3 parties, whole night
Through.

Why god made angels?
I have no time and mood to think
I am hungry sir.

Can you be an angel too?
Every one is, only some are richer.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Babbellapati 10 August 2009

hey...makes my heart feel lighter!

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Christina Phan 10 August 2009

Great imagination and thoughts Kept it up lol 10++

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Brishti Mazumdar 03 August 2009

Ha Ha....wow....excellent..I liked your free thinking...really liked it...10+

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Subroto Chatterjee 03 August 2009

Ah yes, rich angels we too have now. Discriminating heaven....on earth! ! Not to worry. And don't be too anxious to become an angel yet, Nikunj! All in good time....keep writing... Cheers. Subroto

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Hanna Sara 03 August 2009

that's a cool poem... i hope i can be the angel.. but if i be the angel... i would like to stay in the forest.. when there's no body will disturbing me...

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Sally Plumb Plumb 11 April 2020

Very interesting. Food for thought... a different angle.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 28 September 2018

This piece reminds me of the Samaratins.

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Jake Shelvey 30 December 2009

Love this poem, well done, portraying angels in a modern form!

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Angel's lyre 11 August 2009

very good! I liked it

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Siddharth Singh 11 August 2009

Hahaha! Only some are richer... Very nicely done.

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