Friday, May 9, 2008

Angels Comments

Rating: 4.8

angels gather all around
angels down here on the ground
angels wings are white and frail
angels won't sing there hearts to hell
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Hayley Foster
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Ian Singer 18 November 2008

very welll written i liked it

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Jay Boyd 21 October 2008

I like the repetitions but the ending was bland.

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, aryaindia 08 September 2008

The split up of lines can be redone to give a better effect. But the overall worth of the poem is not undermined. Blessings.

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Hayley Foster

Hayley Foster

Akron Ohio
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