Sunday, January 26, 2014

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Little children, I see you smiling
I see you there when I am alone
Are you here keeping me company
Two beautiful girls visiting my home
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Anthony Raymond
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Valerie Dohren 26 January 2014

Lovely poem Anthony - no sign of a wandering mind here. Very well written and rhymed.

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Eldin Van Der Walt 26 January 2014

Hi Anthony, nice write, nothing wrong with your literature skill. If your family made more effort to see you and not let you get so lonely you might not have needed the extra company. I blame them, I don't think you are crazy. All the best, Eldin

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