Tuesday, May 30, 2017

Angelical Swan Comments

Rating: 5.0

I walked along the old river bank,
The trees had now shed autumn leaves,
The twigs underfoot snapped loud as I trod,
There's not much around tween the gaps in the fog,
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Sarah Persson
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Unnikrishnan E S 30 May 2017

Hi sarah, A thing of beauty....! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! As the great poet said, it is a joy for ever! ! ! True about your SWAN and this poem..A marvelous 100++

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Sarah Persson 31 May 2017

Thank you so much im glad you could enjoy

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Tom Allport 30 May 2017

a lovely poem of an unexpected event which you so poetically put must have been seen as heaven sent? ........wonderfully written.

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Sarah Persson 30 May 2017

Thank you Tom for your comment. Sometimes we just miss the simple beauty that emerges from a dreary day

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