Thursday, March 14, 2013

Angelic Warning Comments

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Like the serrating sun of the east
Setting upon the lashes of my brow
His appearance out of the wind
Detest the parting of my soul
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Adetokunbo Osinowo 17 March 2013

Sound warning. Imaginatively captured.

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Unwritten Soul 15 March 2013

The imagery, imagination and the way you presenting just perfect to be painted in readers mind, i can imagine it very well..at least i am one of them...a nice poem, keep it up. write more _Soul

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