Friday, October 7, 2016

Angelic Smile Comments

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That was the most peaceful smile
Ever I saw on the eternal lips
Who was in the cradle to see me off
With her parents under that bow.
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Mahtab Bangalee 26 May 2019

every baby child has a face of his/her inside child face is the true face of heart it's angelic yeah; it's angelic reflection over their face when they smile

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Prabir Gayen 18 February 2019

I failed to rub off the etches That made smooth ditches Along the depth of my soul Which reflected your angelic smile... .......an insightful poem

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Indira Renganathan 22 October 2018

Very much inspiring and touching....you have a wonderful skill of expression....I am really amazed...thanks for sharing your beautiful poems here with us all....10++++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 November 2017

A fascinating poem Your power of creativity is phenomenal.. congratulations

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Khairul Ahsan 27 May 2017

Good imagination. Nice poem.

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Bisy Untan 28 May 2017

Thank you Ahsanji

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 May 2017

The colours of beams melt and I fell Into the the width of heavenly lap, I rolled and rolled with snowy clouds To the farthest end of cosmic bowl.....ohhhhh you have a phantasy my God.... what kind of imagination it is...... very well u have pictured in picturesque way your wonderful imaginative mind.. you are a real poetess. tony

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Akhtar Jawad 13 December 2016

I failed to rub off the etches That made smooth ditches Along the depth of my soul Which reflected your angelic smile. Most beautiful lines of a beautiful poem.

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Bisy Untan 14 December 2016

Thank you Akhtar ji

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Chinedu Dike 07 October 2016

Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely brought forth in good diction with insight. Thanks for sharing Bisy.

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Bisy Untan 14 December 2016

Thank you for your comment as this is my first poem hunter poem.

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Bisy Untan

Bisy Untan

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