Sunday, October 1, 2017

Angelic Melody Comments

Rating: 5.0

On a day when the sun would rise,
I would hear a song that fills my soul that flies.
By the sea that seems to shine,
I would hear a voice that's so divine.
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Casey Jarrell
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Dr Antony Theodore 29 October 2018

Her wings would open wide and her voice would extend far across the skies. When you listen to her song, true love would be near and it will not be far. your poet's notes cleared all doubts........ do u also hear the angels singing in the night...... i wish that your poetic heart can hear it.. thank u. tony

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Casey Jarrell 30 October 2018

To be exact, there was this this girl I was really good friends with back in high school. On occasion I would hear her humming in class or softly singing during recess. She was a really good singer! ! !

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 January 2018

When the sun sets, she fly away and be set free until it is time to sing her angelic melody. visions of angels..... very nice portrayal dear poet. thank you very much. tony

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 01 October 2017

The most loved lines from this poem, The closer I get, the song would rise. Her wings would open wide and her voice would extend far across the skies A huge 10++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 October 2017

Sunrise seems to be very angelic and this fills mind with devotion and love. Divine voice is very well heard in this sunrise. Sun sets and still we hear angelic melody. Both dawn and dusk we hear angelic sound. Beautifully penned poem is shared here.10

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