Saturday, April 16, 2016

Angela Comments

Rating: 5.0

One morning in the balcony of my opposite house,
Only the previous day which had been occupied,
A lady in flimsy pink 'kaftan' attired,
Paced leisurely from one end to the other,
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Om Chawla
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Rajnish Manga 18 April 2016

The poem has all the ingredients of a good short story- a gorgeous young woman at the centre of the plot, mystery and suspense, her not so common nude modelling career, her life-style combined with loneliness with a sad dramatic denouement. The narrative is quite engaging. Loved reading it, more so in the light of your reply to the comments given below.

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Om Chawla 21 April 2016

Thanks, Mr. Rajnish for your appreciative comments.

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