Friday, February 23, 2007

Angel's Wings Comments

Rating: 4.6

I dropped from the sky, like an angel with no wings;
I was like a nightingale, who couldn’t sing.

I had parents who were happy but later tore apart;
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Troy Clark 23 February 2007

Very nice, im not into poems such as these, but this was a nice poem. Very well done. keep at it.

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Catastrophe King 23 February 2007

A very touching and a very BOLD conclusion.... I would say AMEN to your prayers. You have the unique simplicity and say so much in few words. This is a good work..... loved those positive thoughts amongst the negative circumstances! !

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