A darkness envelops me,
Glowing as dark as the night,
All disappears,
Including the light,
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great poem, the words that you use have soo much drama behind them, i love how to you tell a story in your poetry.
An exceptionally powerful insightful and interesting write. Wonderful in conception.
I simply adore this poem. It's probably the best you've written yet. And I know words are not enough to praise it but I wish people could learn something from its beauty. 'Yet I know what I feel is down to me', I think this understanding is an angel all in itself. In the state of mind when we acknowledge that we're not so forlorn as we think we are. Beautiful poem.
that was a really good poem. you used good words and description. i love it
What glowing beauty, Superior presence, And I know that within, Is a blinding essence, is it an apparition or a vision or an imagination or a realization? anyhow u hve wonderfully portrayed your visionary experience. thank u very much.
This is a very deep poem that people can relate to and very good use of words! Keep up the good work!
When I read your poem, I really saw the image of an angel before an human. Congratulations!