Wednesday, July 21, 2010

() Angel's Wings () Comments

Rating: 2.3

A darkness envelops me,
Glowing as dark as the night,
All disappears,
Including the light,
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Kieran J1996
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Marcondes P 27 June 2016

When I read your poem, I really saw the image of an angel before an human. Congratulations!

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Minnie Gehrig 19 August 2010

beautiful, I love the imagry very vivid!

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Dey Blanket 02 August 2010

great poem, the words that you use have soo much drama behind them, i love how to you tell a story in your poetry.

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An exceptionally powerful insightful and interesting write. Wonderful in conception.

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UnKnown Messenger 28 July 2010

I simply adore this poem. It's probably the best you've written yet. And I know words are not enough to praise it but I wish people could learn something from its beauty. 'Yet I know what I feel is down to me', I think this understanding is an angel all in itself. In the state of mind when we acknowledge that we're not so forlorn as we think we are. Beautiful poem.

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Tamika Tucker 28 July 2010

that was a really good poem. you used good words and description. i love it

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 July 2010

What glowing beauty, Superior presence, And I know that within, Is a blinding essence, is it an apparition or a vision or an imagination or a realization? anyhow u hve wonderfully portrayed your visionary experience. thank u very much.

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Miche- Mell ... 22 July 2010

Its a very eloquent poem, beautiful description! well done!

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Miche- Mell ... 22 July 2010

Its a very eloquent poem, beautiful description! well done!

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Miche- Mell ... 22 July 2010

Its a very eloquent poem, beautiful description! well done!

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Marieta Maglas 21 July 2010

This is a very deep poem that people can relate to and very good use of words! Keep up the good work!

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