Angel's Place Comments

Brilliant! Sa

I've just read this again. Give us more.

That was an excellent conversation piece...and I agree with Chinaski... Cheers. Subroto

i just wanted to stay....

i have moved through the poem and reality of life is what i see.... thank you, , , ,

I feel like I went somewhere while reading this- I was touring Angel's place and really enjoyed myself. Got back and thought, where am I? Incredible how much we can forget ourselves in a story.

Just read this again. Thanks for takin' me along.

the narration is superb...............well done

This, my friend, is one of the funniest poems I have ever read hahaha, very well done

A very interesting event. You've always reminded me of Charles Bokowski.Its real, good stuff. Best regards Sally

A really did like this poem...it someewhat reminded me of some of my darker ventures...and you penned it well somewhat reminding me of Bukowski

Very good writing Lee, but not really poetry. Still, very interesting.

Nice dark Mickey Spillane feel. Poetry noir? Nice job

Really interesting..and..the lines are really catching... Thx alot for leading me to it...

LOL, yes Lee I think you went to the hotel California also.lol I found this very mysterious and intriguing also.This would not be some where I would want to eat. Different but very drawing as I found myself pulled into it to find what next.very enjoyable

waa creative work....loved the way yu ended t....altogthr fun n njoymnt in your lines....10++ sebastine....

Definitely not my style, cause it dosen't rhyme. But you do write very enticing invitations! I wouldn't call it dark. Very intriguing. Full of atmosphere and an interesting end. Very 'Hotel California'. Quite enjoyable.

there is a fat woman in tight fitting clothes has a place called Little Angel's lovely, i like it, thanks for sharing

Certainly a place to meet 'interesting' people but you may not want to spend a lot of time with them. This is like a short short story. Stirs the senses, not necessarily in a good way. '10! ' for fascinating creativity. Best Wishes, Marilyn

Hello Lee, I like the angle of being in the bar with Hank Chinaski, maybe even drinkin ' whiskey with him. Bukowski is one of my alltime favorite poets and this long tome had some licks laid down. I saw Cormac McCarthy and Bukowski and Ferlinghetti in your bar scene. I think the best laid stuff was toward the end. I must be a misfit too cause I liked this poem.