Thursday, April 21, 2011

Angel's Goodbye Comments

Rating: 5.0

A golden sky, the sunset on your skin,
You are running on the beach
The sand under your feet
It seems you are the infinity
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Darnaryel Fantaisie
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Akhtar Jawad 23 March 2015

A great poem that touched the heart and soul. The emotions rise like tide of an ocean bringing beautiful words like shining pearls................10

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Adeline Foster 19 September 2011

We can feel your loss and heartache. However this does need some spelling and grammar adjustments. Adeline

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Romeo Della Valle 24 April 2011

This excellent and well crafted write caught my attention! Whenever is see the word angel it reminds me when I wrote: AN ANGER AND A VIOLIN and A MISSING ANGEL. Your writing skills is admiring!

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