A fallen angel I wish to be,
Yet the Lord will not speak to me.
I wish to be human yet again,
But He won't give me a second chance.
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Its good for being 12, I've been writing from a young age too, my one word of advice would be to not try to write like your older than you are. The one great thing about being a young writer is that you can write about you, and it can still be amazing. There are enough sad poems in the world, write something brilliant and young and you!
wow....wonderful......