I watch as he walks by
steadily holding in
trying not to cry
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It's really lovely poem.Inded you're great poet.Bravo! J'aime beaucoup ton poesie. tres bien.
Anouk you are an angel to this young man because you loved him and chose to be. You will fall in love again simply because there are many deserving of an angel...Quite a rare breed. john.
I liked it but it was really sad. Its kinda like Twilight how Edward did not want Bella to becoem a vampire. But I said kinda. You say that ur true love is dead Im sorry anout that. But ur love would like you to get married and have children. He would see you again and you know that. He wants you to be happy. (But thats out of my persative. Im only a kid saying what feels right to say. And if not I'm really sorry then. But I belive he wants you to be happy.)
it is written as another here would write such words as these that tear the soul of one as he described in sorrows poise on brinks that shear the wings off from this soul...you see...iip
this is sad. beautifully written but sad.......you are a fine poet. one of the best i know
A great dedication. You are a great poet. Keep writing. God bless you.