Tuesday, October 6, 2009

Angel Part 2.... Comments

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Is it cute or it is harsh, ,
I don’t know… cuz my heart falls …just like wind..
In the ocean…. With several… broken, , , ICY, , n ICY wind..
I m all spoken… I m all done… I don’t have words…only frozen dreams….
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JAIDEEP GARG
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Ashley Moore 07 October 2009

Wow, this poem is very confusing. Please work on your literature and english, it will help make this worth while

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JAIDEEP GARG

JAIDEEP GARG

mathura u.p, india
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