Thursday, December 20, 2012

Angel On The Shore Comments

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Watching the waves in broken wings
Thinking of all the things you've done
Blaming yourself for everything
In all the world, you are the one
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jim hogg
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Roseann Shawiak 03 January 2014

I like the slow rhythm of this poem - very nice. Last verse leaves a mystery of sorts - wondering what will be changed when the vane swings? Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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