Tuesday, June 9, 2015

Angel On Earth Comments

Rating: 4.5

The moment I arrived on earth
Not knowing what to do,
I introduced myself
With a big cry with shrill.
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Amitava Sur
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 19 December 2015

Mother's love is, indeed, like a classical symphony - the music that reverberates in your mind for ever. I love the way you have infused music into mother's love. Strangely enough, i too associate my mother's love with mellifluous music. A beautiful poem with a fabulous picture of Mother Mary! Thank you for sharing Amitava!

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Manonton Dalan 20 November 2015

my earthly angel gone leaving me her wand which I use to create this beautiful and one

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Afrooz Jafarinoor 19 October 2015

Very nice description of a baby's first encounter with the world! ... The first four lines are lovely with a fine sense of humour! Thank you for the enjoyment you gave us!

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Amitava Sur 26 October 2015

Thank you Afrooz for your nice words.

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Akhtar Jawad 19 June 2015

A beautiful gratitude to an angel like mother.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 June 2015

Reminiscing I found My mother was at the center of my life’s circle And my world’s radius was increasing Gradually with time........Really mother is the center of the life, Fantastic description. Excellent phraseology. I like this poem very much. Many thanks for posting...........10

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Roseann Shawiak 09 June 2015

Amitava, an absolutely gentle and touching poem, beautiful depiction of a mother nourishing and loving her newborn child. Your words fill one with peace while reading this poem, an exquisite picture of how a mother's love raises a child with her heart. It made me think of my own mother and how she must have taken care of me just like this. Awesome poem, Amitava! Thank you for sharing it's beauty and simplicity. RoseAnn

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