Thursday, June 4, 2009

Angel Of The Morning Light Comments

Rating: 5.0

Angel of the morning light,
the sun is up
and the sun is bright
and still I see you sleep
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Gert Strydom
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Akhtar Jawad 04 April 2018

when you open your eyes the gold of green and brown glitters like fire and there’s a sweet smile on your face. and the smile was a lovely reward of nice services and love.

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Milton Styner Jr 19 July 2015

i enjot it. truly heart feel

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Simpa Omoluabi 20 May 2015

an aubade singing solitude

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Sally Plumb Plumb 15 May 2015

Lovely morning poem.

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Tina Mathurin 24 June 2009

Hope you read that to her, she must have loved it

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Rory Hudson 18 June 2009

A beautiful and lyrical piece of writing, a charming tribute to the lucky person who is its subject!

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Mahdokt Walter 18 June 2009

True love is awesome, treasure what you have always..mahdokt

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 17 June 2009

A soft and tender observation of your earthly angel...thanks it warmed my heart knowing such love exists, no doubt you will lovingly be served breakfast in bed

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Tia Maria 15 June 2009

Light, soft & lovely as your angel :) Pure poetry. Now THAT's awesome :) Thanks, T

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Lady Grace 12 June 2009

angel of the morning light brings brightness to your flight all eyes are looking all ears are listening..grace

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Marieta Maglas 12 June 2009

''the gold of green and brown glitters like fire'' a wonderful visual metaphor of colors.. and all.this reflective lyric poem is an excellent portrait...10++

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Gert Strydom

Gert Strydom

Johannesburg, South Africa
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