Angel Of The Arenaceous Beach Comments

Great imagery, but is this some strange desire to be a baby again? Freud would have fun with this! -chuck

This is a beautiful sensual poem with an unexpected twist in the final stanza. You express your passion with an whimsy and more than the hint of a smile. Great poem. love, Allie xxxxxxx

love your phrase - 'borrowed ocean'. love the poem! al.

Just make sure you have the anti-dote for coming back to full size...lol Sensual piece, oh how the mind works!

I can easily relate to those feelings but bear in mind you must be careful what you wish for it may not turn out as you might want Would you really want to be one foot tall

Very soft and sensual.. Becca

Sensual indeed and deeply unusual.... playful too and kind of sexy. A lovely read. t x

Michael your poem is beautifully written, sensually described with passion. It stays in my mind. Thank you for your comments on my poem Niagara Falls, how lucky you are to live so close. I will think of you being there with my poem. You have made me happy!

hahaha... this poem rocks! i love it! ! ! Keep it up <3Lynn<3