I rememeber that night when death was so near.
I remember being in your arms whispering in your ear.
I remember the tear filled eyes and unhappy faces.
Thinking to myself ' why here of all places? '
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The mistakes I made had brought me my doom. great line. that is a really good poem. you are a good poet and your only 12 that is amazing. Becca
You are an amazing poet for being 12, that one of the best poems i have ever! Keep writing
awesome poem! i like how you used a line from another poem and wove it into your own
So sad it made me start o cry. I had tears coming down my eyes. Great write