Tuesday, August 12, 2008

Angel Of Mercy Comments

Rating: 4.0

Angel of mercy,
how did u find me?
why did you pick me up agin?
Angel of mercy
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angelica santos
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Ron Flowers 14 October 2008

Angelica, this is a real good poem, but agin, i, u really detracts from your work. I repeat, a real good poem. Regards Ron

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Greenwolfe 1962 12 August 2008

I have to recommend this because it has several elements I like. Repetition, Simplicity and conciseness. It really isd my kind of ideal poem. It even has real feeling substance to it. Excellant. A real poem. GW62

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