Tuesday, August 3, 2010

Angel Of Life Comments

Rating: 2.8

Away from Eden's floor where all green arise
Far from the Euphrates, the searing soil baked my root
Sweat from my forehead vanished at the lips of my foot
& I dry as one who pulls arrow at the fiery sun
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Aditya Pathak 'particle'
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Smrithi Padmakumar 22 March 2012

adorable! :) really liked this one! it would be great if you add a few more sentences, before the poem, on the situation which made you write it! regards, Smrithi!

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