Thursday, April 26, 2007

Angel In Pink Converse Comments

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She flew right past me one day,
My eyes must have been blinded by her light,
For seconds later she was gone.
So she must have been an angel,
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Charlie F. Kane
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Yes No 01 May 2007

A nice poem with a good use of imagery, you seemed to have captured the idea of unrequited love, or perhaps just a form of infatuation in a brief poem.

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Charlie F. Kane

Charlie F. Kane

Solihull, Birmingham
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